Hello readers! Been really really
long time I posted something here. I wasn’t draining out of ideas to write, but
wanted to share something that is actually exciting. Actually, I been doing
something that is absolutely exciting, at least to me! So without further
delays I am posting my first episode of the writing.
Few days ago, I was spending a
large amount of quiet time thinking about a plot line and was thrilled with the
overall idea. The idea, the concept, the setting of the plot and the
development of the plot, everything was the effort of my wife and mine (Thank God!
For blessing us with some writing abilities).
So while working on this idea, I
was wondering if I could share this as a Blog
Episodes or rather Blogisodes.
Does this word even exist? If not let me coin it! Your feedback will give us and also HAMSA an extremely enthusiastic motivation to unfold the story further. Please do not hesitate to express your thoughts.
Note: The plot, the setting, the development of the plot and every
element of HAMSA belongs to the writers own thoughts and ideas. Any violation/plagiarism
/ Usage of this content and concept without prior consent from the author shall
punishable as per the law. In case of any relevance to the living or dead, it
is purely fictional.
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HAMSA – Episode 1
On the straight lonely road, with
fields on one end and a river bed on the other hand, and with no human being or any other species in the
vicinity on either sides, the road merely appeared as a no man’s land. From a
far off distance, it is only the little noise of the Royal Enfield thump that
is audible along with the hazy image of a person riding it.
As the rides laps out more and
more further, finds a spot on the river bank with a tree that is giving enough
shade to rest a bit. Enchanted with this spot, the rider decides to stop for a
sojourn. Disembarking from the bullet, the rider removes the helmet, the
gloves and puts them on the bullet seat.
Walking in camouflage pants and a
leather jacket along with the aviators, the rider is enthralled with the beauty
of the place. Few steps of rambling, the rider slowly removes the helmet and
the jacket and throws it on the ground. With a sleeveless tank top and moving
the soft hair that is falling on the face due to breeze, the person’s face is
as pristine as moon.
The person pulls out a cigarette,
introduces herself “My Name is HAMSA (Swan).” In fact, my full name is…. After
a brief pause, she says, “for now this name is enough.”
Hamsa sits there for some time
enjoying the tranquillity and is deeply staring at the river. Engrossed in a
quiet conversations within her mind, she gets lost in the charm. With a sense
of happiness and liberation, her heart is thumping with joy and she actually
was able to feel the beat.
Shall be continued based on your feedback... ☺
Nice start
ReplyDeleteThanks mate
DeleteGood. Hope it doesn't take Bahubali's time for second episode....waiting for it
ReplyDeleteHopfully not Anand...happy to know u found it good
DeleteLooking for the next blogisode anna. Looks good so far :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Srikar. Will post soon
DeleteSuperb start..Love the detailing..
ReplyDeleteGreat start....waiting for the next.
ReplyDeleteThanks dude... Will come back with one soon
DeleteInteresting, what's next
ReplyDeleteNext is going to come sirji
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